I Walked into a Poem

On Wednesdays I walk while my children are at CCD. I have just over an hour timeframe for my walk. And I actually enjoy the walks during the late fall and winter, even if I do have to bundle up. Last night I wore my coat and stocking cap, but didn’t need gloves. There are sections of my walk with very little light pollution, so I get to stargaze as I walk. (Faithful readers know this about me.)

Many writers, now and throughout history, walk as part of their daily routine, Stephen King, William Wordsworth, and others. They have works that were thought of and even are subjects of what they experienced on their walks. Wordsworth’s poem, “The Solitary Reaper,” comes to mind.

I spend many of my walks jotting down ideas into my note app for poems or stories. I come back to them later. But last night I had one of those moments that an event during my walk inspired an almost complete poem. I touched up the poem when I got back to the car, waiting for my daughter to be dismissed from CCD.

I decided to share it here as part of this blog post because I could talk about the genesis of an idea, but also reinforce the power of the simple moments in life. The depth our hearts can reach, even in routine moments, like my Wednesday night walks.

So, here is my poem. I hope you enjoy the moment with me.

“November Evening”

On an early November

evening walk

my companions

are the stars

bright, sharp

like the bite

of the winter wind

against my cheeks

I look down

from stargazing

Lights from cars

and street lamps

keep my steps

safe on the sidewalk

In front of me

I see

four pennies

scattered

on the concrete

as if a section

of a constellation

cracked from the cold

and fell to Earth

I stop to gather them

three heads

and one tails

Not enough for a nickel

But so much more than nothing

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